Talk:Death toll exceeds 200 after heavy rain and mudslides in Sri Lanka
Review of revision 4319458 [Passed][edit]
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Revision 4319458 of this article has been reviewed by Acagastya (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 18:51, 2 June 2017 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: I say it, I am allowing this one. It is just above the minimal WN:Length. I could not find the information about the school. Please do not "create" headlines for the news sources. Significant content from Monday's event, fourth day — that is not a good thing. Points to improve:
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Revision 4319458 of this article has been reviewed by Acagastya (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 18:51, 2 June 2017 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: I say it, I am allowing this one. It is just above the minimal WN:Length. I could not find the information about the school. Please do not "create" headlines for the news sources. Significant content from Monday's event, fourth day — that is not a good thing. Points to improve:
The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
"exceed" or "exceeds"?[edit]
It seems to me like the article title should read "Death toll exceeds 200"; "exceed" doesn't quite sound right here. -- numbermaniac 06:24, 4 June 2017 (UTC)
Published on the 2nd, not 12th[edit]
{{edit protected}} The article was published on June 2, not June 12. Therefore, the article was logged incorrectly at Wikinews:2017/June. The date should be changed. --George Ho (talk) 19:51, 12 June 2017 (UTC)
- Fixed. --Pi zero (talk) 20:01, 12 June 2017 (UTC)